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Dr. Lance Sweets ([personal profile] lifetothefullest) wrote in [community profile] dankmemes2017-05-08 07:21 pm
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The IC Critque Meme!



Have you ever just wanted to tell someone flat-out what you think of them as a person? Does your roommate have this one quirk that drives you up the wall, like dripping apathy all over the kitchen sink? Sometimes all it takes to be the best person you can be is a dose of self-awareness, sometimes what it takes instead is a cluebat to the head... and sometimes they just have a stupid name you can never quite spell right.

For all this and more, have I got the meme for you!

THE LOWDOWN
i. Post a header with your character's name.
ii. Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
iii. Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
iv. Feel free to assume there's a compulsion to speak their minds, if your character's not usually the type to give unsolicited advice.
v. A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.

Shamelessly borrowed from [community profile] empatheias
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-09 09:29 pm (UTC)(link)
[Either she's hit a nerve or Sweets has finally found the end of his tolerance. Everyone does, eventually.]

You think you're good at surviving?

[It's asked with genuine curiosity.]
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-09 09:55 pm (UTC)(link)
[Maketh tips her head to the side. Now that she's pushed she's finally found something he doesn't want revealed. Are you good at surviving? If he said no, that would be pathetic. Saying yes is expected. But hesitance is another thing all together.

She smiles. Perhaps he's kept his strength hidden deep and only now, under the weight of her prodding, letting some of it come to the surface.]


I have a proposal for you, Doctor Sweets. Do you want to hear it?
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-09 10:50 pm (UTC)(link)
It's a game, of sorts. I ask you a question and you ask me one. We both answer honestly. And then go our separate ways.

[There's nothing to prevent either of them from lying. But that's part of the game. Knowing the difference.]
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-09 10:57 pm (UTC)(link)
[Maketh gives him a little smile.]

It tells you something, doesn't it?
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-10 02:10 am (UTC)(link)
Maybe. That depends if you know what to do with the information.

[Or just hoard it for the sake of knowing. Maketh shrugs.]

You are more difficult than the others.
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-10 02:26 am (UTC)(link)
[Whether he's good at his job remains to be proven, in Maketh's eye.]

It is your job to be an annoyance?
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-10 02:32 am (UTC)(link)
Really.

[Have a dubious look.]

What is the purpose of that?
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-10 02:37 am (UTC)(link)
And people put up with this.

[Maketh has been tempted to punch him more than once. Possibly more, if the threat he represents becomes manifest in more damning ways. Surely another world - even one as strange as his - wouldn't be so forgiving.]
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-10 02:45 am (UTC)(link)
[Counseling. That thing his world does. Maketh narrows her eyes.]

And you never break this agreement.
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-10 02:51 am (UTC)(link)
The process of counseling. You said there was an agreement.

[She grimaces.]

Never mind. Your behavior must provoke certain reactions. I suspect some of those are helpful for your duties. I see.
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-10 02:59 am (UTC)(link)
Why do people trust you not to reveal anything?

[That's the part she has trouble with. Why wouldn't someone in his position use the information? It would make his job easier, show him who could be trusted and who could be broken and used as a stepping stone. It feels impossible to Maketh that someone wouldn't do this.]

Certain reactions. What sort?
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[personal profile] mismanagement 2017-05-10 03:10 am (UTC)(link)
[Lots of things are illegal. Murder is illegal. They still happen. Maketh considers this briefly. Perhaps the rules are enforced more in his world, with the understanding that no one is immune. She's heard of worlds like that. She's never seen one, though.

That must be nice, she thinks.

She nods just once.]


Your honesty is appreciated, Doctor Sweets.