the | in character | critique meme

[dedikated]

Have you ever just wanted to tell someone flat-out what you think of them as a person? Does your roommate have this one quirk that drives you up the wall, like dripping apathy all over the kitchen sink? Sometimes all it takes to be the best person you can be is a dose of self-awareness, sometimes what it takes instead is a cluebat to the head... and sometimes they just have a stupid name you can never quite spell right.

For all this and more, have I got the meme for you!

THE LOWDOWN
i. Post a header with your character's name.
ii. Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
iii. Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
iv. A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.
v. Here are quick links to the Dreamwidth inbox and recent posted comments page if you want them.

Shamelessly borrowed from empatheias

Comments

Rhys

[hybridification]

[synthedick]

For just being a dude with stuff, you're not so bad. You definitely seem like the management type. Glad to have you working on the power station.

[fleshing]

SUSPICIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!

[bluffed]

There are so many conversations we need to have.

So.

So many.

[murderpotato]

If you get any more fuckin' people trying to kill you, I'm gonna fuckin' kill you.

Re: Rhys

[cashlin]

What is wrong with you.

[glacius]

You are a very... [a pause as he tries to figure out what to say, filled with some awkward, pointless gesturing before he just gives up,] ... strange little man.

But you helped me out of the colosseum, so I suppose I owe you thanks.

[unfollowing]

It wasn't personal.

[circumitus]

[MOTHERFUCKER YOU NEED JESUS]

Thanks. [For stuff.]

Ronan Lynch

[greywaren]

[unknowable]

You swear like it's your first language, you have terrible taste in music, and you think internet memes are the highest form of humor, and yet somehow you're still one of the most attractive people I've ever met.

[quaerit]

Murder Squash is so terrible, I'm considering telling you I like it just because I think you'd play it less.

[ampliat]

Your tattoo is pretty badass.

I'm actually really jealous.

[casperdisaster]

I still can't believe it took you like a year to kiss Adam.

[murderpotato]

Learn to be less fuckin' stupid.

[sage advice from drunkle gren]

[whichend]

Your bird is a better person than you are.

But your bird is pretty wonderful, so I suppose you are not terrible all the time.

cecily trevelyan

[closerift]

[whichend]

You are not my mother.

(But sometimes I wish you were.)

Noah Czerny

[casperdisaster]

 

[quaerit]

You're worth a lot more than you think you are. I wish you could see it.

Arya Stark

[whichend]

 

[unfollowing]

You don't let anyone fuck with you, and that's badass. Don't ever change. Shit does not get better when you get older.

Johanna Mason

[morphinum]

 

[thechoiceisyours]

So, I know it's like, against your whole badass 'I don't need anyone' persona but can I suggest, as a friend, that you acquire some chill.

[Despite his teasing he really does like you, Johanna.]

Ashley

[cowardley]

[unfollowing]

Don't be afraid to be a bitch now and then. People call me a bitch becuse I do what I want. That's not a bad thing. I don't mind standing up for you, but come on. I know you've got it in you.

Sharon da Silva

[unitas]

[unfollowing]

Anyone who isn't afraid of Kuchisake Onna is someone worth having on your team or whatever. Though what the fuck have you been through that you're not afraid of a ghost like her. Jesus.

Clear

[fuwatokurage]

Re: Clear

[wormintheglass]

I'm going to feel terrible about this and probably unfairly resent you forever.

Liquid Snake

[liquid_serpent]