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kate galloway; ([personal profile] dedikated) wrote in [community profile] dankmemes2016-04-25 12:28 am

the | in character | critique meme


Have you ever just wanted to tell someone flat-out what you think of them as a person? Does your roommate have this one quirk that drives you up the wall, like dripping apathy all over the kitchen sink? Sometimes all it takes to be the best person you can be is a dose of self-awareness, sometimes what it takes instead is a cluebat to the head... and sometimes they just have a stupid name you can never quite spell right.

For all this and more, have I got the meme for you!

THE LOWDOWN
i. Post a header with your character's name.
ii. Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
iii. Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
iv. A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.
v. Here are quick links to the Dreamwidth inbox and recent posted comments page if you want them.

Shamelessly borrowed from [community profile] empatheias
bluffed: (pic#10200030)

[personal profile] bluffed 2016-04-25 12:52 am (UTC)(link)
You're like a 12 on the insane scale but. Uh. You're alright. Maybe just tone it down a bit? Inside voices...
fleshing: (CAUTERIZE THE WOUND!!!)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-25 02:29 am (UTC)(link)
I HAVE ONE OF THOSE.

[Because it's......inside his head.......get it.......]
bluffed: (fionaiscute288_anabitoic)

[personal profile] bluffed 2016-04-25 02:47 am (UTC)(link)
Right. You're an 11 already!
bluffed: (🔫  - 17)

[personal profile] bluffed 2016-04-25 02:48 am (UTC)(link)
Okay, 11.9. Still progress.
cashlin: <user name=sweetfarthing site=insanejournal.com> (A ʟɪᴛᴛʟᴇ ᴘɪᴇᴄᴇ ᴏғ sᴏᴍᴇᴏɴᴇ ᴛʜᴇʏ ʜɪᴅᴇ)

Re: Krieg

[personal profile] cashlin 2016-04-25 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
[PRESUMING AXTON EXPLAINED KRIEG ALREADY]

Ssssoooooo I'm still getting used to the fact that we've apparently got a Psycho on our side, but you haven't axed any of us yet, so I guess I trust you....?
fleshing: (SOMEBODY STILL CARES??)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-25 02:30 am (UTC)(link)
GOOD WORD FROM A PRETTY LADY??

[Do all sirens know each other

krieg has no idea. he's just kind of assuming that yes, they do]
cashlin: <user name=yevon> (Bᴀʙʏ ᴘᴇɴᴇᴛʀᴀᴛᴇ ᴍʏ ᴍɪɴᴅ)

[personal profile] cashlin 2016-04-26 04:42 am (UTC)(link)
Good word, for sure.

[And she'll actually take "pretty lady" as a compliment for once.]
fleshing: (WHO WANTS THE FIRST SLICE?!)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-26 05:40 am (UTC)(link)
GOOD!!!!!!!!!

[ :D :D :D ]
cashlin: <user name=sweetfarthing site=insanejournal.com> (Cᴀᴜsᴇ ᴛʜᴏᴜɢʜ I'ᴍ ʟᴇᴀᴠɪɴɢ)

[personal profile] cashlin 2016-04-26 05:52 am (UTC)(link)
That's...

[Almost cute???? Is she justified in calling a Psycho cute.]

Uh. Great! Good man.

[??? ? ?? ? ]
fleshing: (NOBODY KILLS ME BUT ME!!!)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-26 05:56 am (UTC)(link)
[BEAAAAR HUUUUUUG

assuming he doesn't get...incinerated or anything. Look he just misses his boss okay]
cashlin: <user name=sweetfarthing site=insanejournal.com> (Aɴᴅ ᴄᴀᴜɢʜᴛ ᴜᴘ ɪɴ ᴛʜɪs ᴡᴏʀʟᴅ)

[personal profile] cashlin 2016-04-26 06:02 am (UTC)(link)
[WELL THIS

IT SURE IS.
]

G-gentler, gentler! [she appreciates the love here, but oh my god he's gonna rupture something help]
fleshing: (CAUTERIZE THE WOUND!!!)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-26 06:13 am (UTC)(link)
[RIGHT. DON'T BREAK THE BOSS. just...gently let go of the siren and don't crush her lungs all right]

CAN'T RUIN THE MOMENT!
wormintheglass: (smile)

Re: Krieg

[personal profile] wormintheglass 2016-04-25 10:44 am (UTC)(link)
You're adorable. I want to keep you as a pet.
fleshing: (CAUTERIZE THE WOUND!!!)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-25 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
THANK????? YOU?????????
hybridification: (ᴡᴇʟʟ ᴛʜᴀᴛ ᴇsᴄᴀʟᴀᴛᴇᴅ ǫᴜɪᴄᴋʟʏ)

[personal profile] hybridification 2016-04-25 02:54 pm (UTC)(link)
I know I said 'please don't kill me' before, but like.

Please, dude, don't kill me.
fleshing: (NOBODY KILLS ME BUT ME!!!)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-25 05:28 pm (UTC)(link)
I'LL SPIT IN YOUR BRAIN-JUICE!!!!!!!
hybridification: (ᴏɴᴇ ʙᴀᴅ ᴘᴜᴘ!)

[personal profile] hybridification 2016-04-28 02:13 am (UTC)(link)
No, that is the opposite of what I'm asking for, here!
fleshing: (SOMEBODY STILL CARES??)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-28 02:40 am (UTC)(link)
WATCH WHO YOU MIX YOUR MEAT WITH, FUNNY-GUY!!

[aka don't go around hanging with that handsome jerkbag you here. he's watching youuuuuuu]
hybridification: (ғʟᴏᴀᴛ ʟɪᴋᴇ ᴀ ʙᴜᴛᴛᴇʀғʟʏ...)

[personal profile] hybridification 2016-04-29 10:43 pm (UTC)(link)
[WELL, HE'LL DEFINITELY KEEP THAT IN MIND.

Maybe.

This is all going to go horribly for him tbh.]
liquid_serpent: credit: shinkawa (scheming)

[personal profile] liquid_serpent 2016-04-30 08:15 am (UTC)(link)
You're a man who likes meat, fighting and showing off. We should start a fan club.
fleshing: (SOMEBODY STILL CARES??)

[personal profile] fleshing 2016-04-30 04:55 pm (UTC)(link)
YES!!!!!!!!!!!!