the | in character | critique meme

[dedikated]

Have you ever just wanted to tell someone flat-out what you think of them as a person? Does your roommate have this one quirk that drives you up the wall, like dripping apathy all over the kitchen sink? Sometimes all it takes to be the best person you can be is a dose of self-awareness, sometimes what it takes instead is a cluebat to the head... and sometimes they just have a stupid name you can never quite spell right.

For all this and more, have I got the meme for you!

THE LOWDOWN
i. Post a header with your character's name.
ii. Comment in-character to other people's headers. With what? Depends on your CR! Maybe they're a good person and really should keep on keeping on, maybe literally everyone can see they need to suck it up and confess already, maybe they'll change their wicked ways if just one extra person casts aspersions on their pompadour. Bring in examples if you want, as with any helpful critique. Be as creative as you like!
iii. Other characters will comment to yours, no doubt overflowing with well-meaning advice on how to be the best person they can be. Your character is free to respond. Excuse you, maybe despair is still in fashion??
iv. A probably unnecessary reminder, but just remember, this is not a place for OOC crit! There are other, more appropriate channels for that.
v. Here are quick links to the Dreamwidth inbox and recent posted comments page if you want them.

Shamelessly borrowed from empatheias

Comments

[unfollowing]

Loosen up a little. You're not actually that much of a bitch, maybe? But you need to chill a little more.

[mismanagement]

I do believe that's the first time I've been called a bitch as a compliment.

[unfollowing]

I'm full of surprises like that.

[mismanagement]

Yes. Surprises.

[unfollowing]

Oh come on. Are you judging me without even really knowing me? I mean, it's not like it's the first time anyone's done that, but still.

[mismanagement]

I'm judging you based on the interactions we've already had.

[unfollowing]

You barely know me from those. A total of, what, five hours? That's so not enough to say you know someone.

[mismanagement]

I can assess a threat in under ten seconds. How long does knowing someone generally take?

[unfollowing]

A hell of a lot longer than ten seconds.

This isn't a goddamn battlefield, you know.

[Well. It is. Just not the kind Maketh is used to.]

[mismanagement]

[She looks surprised.]

Of course it is. The stakes are the same.

[unfollowing]

Arguably.

You're a lot less likely to get killed in civilian life.

[mismanagement]

In a better place, that would be true.

[unfollowing]

Shit, you're right, I forgot for a second we're in this hellhole.

You still don't really know me, though.

[mismanagement]

I--suppose I don't, not really.

[Looooong pause.]

I'd like to, though.

once again emily potentially ruins the moment

[unfollowing]

Are you being sincere or are you coming onto me? Because if it's the latter, I have a boyfriend, sorry.

it IS her superpower

[mismanagement]

[Maketh just groans, rubbing her eyes. Why is this her life?] You are a child. As I have said. Repeatedly.

[unfollowing]

Just checking.

[And for once, she's going to ignore the fact that Maketh has called her a child. It's just funny to see how easy it is to push Maketh's buttons.]

Glad we're clear on that.

[mismanagement]

I'm sure your boyfriend appreciates it.

[Arg. Why are you like this, Emily?]

[unfollowing]

[To avoid going completely quiet at that, Emily scowls. It's still a second or two before she responds.] He does. He'd tell you that himself if he were here.

[Her lie of a confession notwithstanding. Matt will understand. Matt always listens to her.

Maybe, if Emily ever does let Maketh in, Maketh will get an answer to that question.]

[mismanagement]

[Maketh nods slowly. She hadn't intended that to -- hurt, not really.] Maybe you'll see him here. I have a theory that certain worlds are -- more interesting, than others, to the gods. It might explain why you and your friends were pulled her almost as a group.

[unfollowing]

[Shrugging, Emily looks away.] He's the only one of us who hasn't been here yet. Chris says he's due to drop in.

[She pauses, shrugging again.] I'm not so sure. He doesn't deserve to get pulled in here.

[mismanagement]

Maybe not. But it would be a comfort, wouldn't it?

[unfollowing]

[It's not a question she needs to think on, but Emily still doesn't answer right away.]

For me, yeah.

[Now she looks at Maketh, gaze neutral.]

I don't care if that makes me a selfish bitch.

[mismanagement]

[Maketh shrugs. It's not her place to judge.] It's good to have people. I'd forgotten that for a while.

[unfollowing]

[She's surprised that Maketh doesn't start citing some rule or another at her for that, but she only shows it in that she frowns slightly, briefly.]

Yeah. [And it's good to treat them like human beings, too.] You're here alone, right? Like, with no one from your world?